Getaway

by Callia ChowPhoto of Callia Chow

Callia is a first-year student who currently lives in Indonesia and who hopes to study Entrepreneurship in the College of Management. She has an interest in music and languages, and feels that this class was the first time she was “encouraged to think about the connections between her two passions and to create something in both writing and song.” Callia grew up speaking English and Chinese, and through the years she has spoken Indonesian and Korean; she also has learned German and Japanese. She has a great interest in learning new languages and hopes to become fluent in many more. Callia believes that “language comes in many different forms and it impacts our lives even when we seem oblivious to it.” She says that “this essay project made me realize how language has impacted my life and will continue to do so in the future.”



It was a whole new and different world. It seemed as though time had stopped and everything frozen in place. Reading books, fiction books in particular, was one of the things I really enjoyed as a little kid. I loved reading Chinese comics, novels and also English ones too. As I was starting to get caught up in the busyness of life, reading brought me to a world that only I was in and it provided me a space where I felt relaxed and calm. Reading has been my getaway therapy since I was a little girl. When I was in elementary school, whenever I had spare time during lunch breaks, I would always head to the school library to read books. It was one of the places in school that I would visit often, and it was a sort of getaway from all the studying too. The tranquil environment that I was immersed in, whenever I read books, was something that really gave me a source of comfort and quietness.

Even though reading was a source of comfort for me, I was not particularly good at writing. Perhaps due to my lack of creativity, it has always been fairly difficult for me to come up with ideas when writing essays. It amazes me whenever I read different sorts of fictional books; I always wonder how the author was able to express every single detail so meticulously and how they depicted the scenarios as though it was brought to life. I must say, I envy and admire those people who are unimaginably creative and have lots of great ideas. Everyone has a different way of looking at something and expressing themselves in the form of language, which I consider to be intriguing.

Being able to express ideas in different languages is also truly intriguing. Being a bilingual student, speaking both English and Chinese in a Singaporean household, I consider myself fortunate and thankful for this ability. I personally think that both languages are very powerful, and I certainly have great interest in both languages. I speak English primarily at home and at school and thus I did not have much difficulty in learning the language itself. However, English or any other language is much more than just knowing how to speak and write it. In the essay, “Mother Tongue” by Amy Tan, the writer talks about her personal perspective of language and how it impacted her. Tan mentions in her essay, “I wanted to capture what language ability tests can never reveal: her intent, her passion, her imagery, the rhythms of her speech and the nature of her thoughts.” (Tan, 3) Tan envisions her mother as her main reader and wanted to write books that were easy enough for her mother to understand. This is because she described the English that she grew up speaking to her mother as “simple”. In my opinion, we do not need to use difficult, complicated ideas or words to express our feelings and writings. Those complexities should not be a determiner to judge our level of language. I think that every single language has its own beautiful story to it, and being able to really relate and understand more about it is one of the things deemed meaningful when learning a language.

Speaking of languages having its beautiful story, my own language life became more interesting when I moved to Indonesia when I was around 10 years old. In the beginning, I had little knowledge about the Indonesian language. It was quite a challenge for me to communicate in the Indonesian language with people in daily life or even at school. There were some subjects in school that were taught in Indonesian and I would have difficulties catching up with the class because I was not good at reading and writing in Indonesian. However, I was grateful that the teachers were very helpful and supportive; they would slowly guide me along the way with patience. That was one of the reasons I was able to cope much easier with the classes.

Being in an environment where the native language was not a language that I was familiar with really brought me out of my comfort zone and pushed me to do better and try harder every time I struggled. I tried to improve my level of Indonesian by communicating more with native people, and it helped me improve my vocabularies as well. I believe that one of the most effective ways to learn a new language is to practice speaking with locals and it will slowly make you feel more comfortable and confident with the language. Malcolm X, in his short narrative called “Coming to an Awareness of Language”, talks about his experiences learning English during his time in prison, mainly through the use of a dictionary. He wanted to be able to express his ideas more easily through writing and to be more articulate in English as well. He stated in his narrative, “Anyone who has read a great deal can imagine the new world that opened.” (X, 3) Malcolm X spent most of his time in prison improving on his reading and writing. He mentioned in the text that as his word-base broadened; he could understand things he did not understand before. We both had something in common, which was learning and improving on a language. I went from only knowing a few basic words in Indonesian to someone who can probably understand a lot more now and communicate. The feeling you get when you finally understand something you did not before, never fails to fascinate me. As someone who has great interest in different languages, I find myself continuing to explore more aspects of different languages and create meaningful learning experiences along the way.

Language is one of the essential tools we need to help us make sense of the world, it is important in communicating with people and building relationships with them. Language can influence and shape the way we look at things, how we connect with others, and make our experiences in life more fulfilling. It can also help people to understand more about each other’s cultures. Most importantly, language helps us express our feelings, desires and curiosity of the world. Having all these mixed feelings and experiences with languages, I would describe my current relationship with reading and writing to be a love and hate relationship. Love, because it guides me along the way to better improve myself as an individual, paving more opportunities in both social and work life. It allows me to create special connections with people in my everyday life. I find myself constantly exploring and learning new things through the power of language and it definitely shows me the many amazing opportunities life has to offer. I gain a great amount of knowledge through reading books which is helpful in improving my English skills and allowing me for a getaway time from the hectic part of life. However, at times I feel frustrated when I face problems writing in English. For example, writing an essay sometimes requires students to come up with interesting ideas or put our experiences in words, which I find myself struggling at times. I have many jumbled up ideas in my head, but in order to put them into words, I have to spend quite a bit of time pondering on it. I have to say, writing is not really my forte. Nonetheless, my experiences with reading and writing has given me many great insights into how powerful a language can be. Language has impacted my life in many various ways and provided a platform for me to learn more about the world and myself as an individual. I have also developed more curiosity and eagerness towards learning more about one of the most beautiful aspects in life, language.

The Marginalization of African Americans in Educational Institutions Through Race and Language

by Aneika RobinsonPhoto of Aneika Robinson

Aneika is a sophomore and an undecided major who lives in Springfield, MA. She came to the United States from Jamaica when she was three years old. In this paper, Aneika wanted to address some of the subtle ways that “institutional racism is found within the foundations of schools in the United States.” She says that this essay “became something that was very special to me because it addressed a social issue that I am very passionate about. I care for equality of all people of color, as I believe that the color of a person’s skin should not determine how they should be taught or treated.”


African American students are often marginalized in educational institutions because of the color of their skin. The discrimination that they receive from institutional racism in the United States traces all the way back to during the enslavement of African Americans. During slavery, African Americans conducted secret schooling that taught reading and writing, despite it being forbidden by slaveholders. As a result of their experiences, “African Americans began to value freedom, resistance, self-determination, literacy and education” (Alridge, 478). After Emancipation, and by 1870, one-fourth of black school-aged children from southern states attended school, however, even with their faith and progress in education, many factors prevented many of them from receiving true schooling. Not until the year of 1930 was 80 percent of the black southern population literate (Alridge, 478). According to “On the Education of Black Folk: W.E.B. DuBois and the Paradox of Segregation” by Derrick Alridge, W.E.B. DuBois, amongst his many other influential achievements, was an advocate of a broad liberal arts education at the college level. He desired for African Americans to be taught in an environment where their history and culture would not be excluded. However, despite his dream and influence, “separate and unequal” became the pattern in the financing of African American public education, causing racism to continue to be institutionalized in the school system, even until today.

Does Code-Switching Discriminate Against Black English?
Whites have found a way, in the institutionalized teaching of the English language, to keep the marginalization of African Americans going in educational institutions through the linguistic term “code switching.” According to Vershawn Ashanti Young, the original definition of the term is accommodating two language varieties in one speech act, which in simpler terms is the practice of language blending. However, the more prevailing definition that is taught now in educational institutions today as the accepted and more suited practice for teaching composition and speech to marginalize African Americans, is language conversion. Now one might question, how can this altered definition of “code switching” be related to African Americans, or race in general? According to Patricia Dunn and Kenneth Lindblom, it is because, “If we teach standardized, handbook grammar as if it is the only ‘correct’ form of grammar, we are teaching in cooperation with a discriminatory power system” (Dunn and Lindblom, 43). This makes sense since many African Americans, including myself, do not always speak in what one may call your “Standard English” and often engage in “code switching.” Unfortunately, the usage of our own dialect is deemed improper or inappropriate, so were pressured in using our dialect in only “appropriate” settings.

The journal article “Nah, We Straight”: An Argument Against Code Switching” is written by Vershawn Ashanti Young, a professor at the University of Waterloo who works in the departments of Communication Arts and English Language and Literature. Young’s journal article is an argument against code switching that uses language substitution, which is the definition of code switching that instructors usually and improperly use. He argues that the original definition is language blending. He uses different sources that agree with his argument and others that counter it, however both prove that code switching is used to directly target African Americans. Referenced in his article, the book Code Switching: Teaching Standard English in Urban Classrooms by authors, linguist Rebecca S. Wheeler and elementary teacher Rachel Swords, believe that the purpose of language educators is to help students with the transitioning of the grammar that they use at home to school grammar in the classroom. They urge teachers to ignore race when teaching and discussing code switching, despite the fact that they write, that they “recommend teaching [black] students to recognize the grammatical differences between home speech and school speech so that they are then able to choose the language style most appropriate to the time, place, audience, and communicative purpose” (Wheeler and Swords, 52-53). This inherent bias supports standard language ideology, also called “dominant language ideology,” which is the belief that there is a single set of dominant language rules that stem from one dominant dialogue (like Standard English) that all writers and speakers of English must conform to in order to communicate effectively. Wheeler and Swords urge teachers to ignore race but then use race as a way to point out to students that there is a “dominant language” for them to learn. They are not promoting the better alternative of “code meshing” that Young suggests (Young, 50). This language ideology also dictates that you can speak however you want – but only at home.

In contrast to what Wheeler and Swords claim, Young believes that this definition of code switching cannot be about anything else, if not about race. He states that someone cannot draw on what African Americans have experienced, then render them invisible, and therefore, take away their historical and contemporary racial experience from discussion (Young, 51). This code switching is the ongoing racism against the language habits of blacks. He believes that since most teachers mess up the meaning of code switching, he decided to create a new term called “code meshing,” which is the multi-dialectalism and plurilingualism in one speech act (Young, 50). Young promotes the blending of the simultaneous use of American English dialects in formal discursive products, such as political speeches, student papers, and media interviews. “Unlike code switching, code meshing does not require students to “hold back their Englishes” but permits them to bring them more forcefully and strategically forward” (Young, 62). Code meshing is something that won’t be hard to perform as African Americans consciously and subconsciously do it whenever we communicate, as nobody really subscribes to or follow standard modes of expression all of the time. Young also wrote a journal article in 2010 titled “Should Writers Use They Own English,” where he portrays code meshing through his own writing. He states “But don’t nobody’s language, dialect, or style make them “vulnerable to prejudice.” It’s ATTITUDES. It be the way folks with some power perceive other people’s language. Like the way some view, say, black English when used in school or at work. Black English don’t make it own-self oppressed” (Young, 110). Throughout Young’s article he purposefully uses his own dialect rather than Standard English. He does this intentionally to discredit the claims that Stanley Fish says about the need to use standard language. Young tackles each claim that Fish argues, in mostly black vernacular, in favor of the substitution definition of code switching and for the most part disagrees with them. Young shows that the term “code switching” is being used wrong by using “code meshing” in his own writing. He also argues that taking away people’s right to use their own dialect is denying their racial differences. Young also references Charles F. Coleman’s journal article, “Our Students Write with Accents. Oral Paradigms for ESD Students.” He argues, “Everybody mix the dialect they learn at home with whateva other dialect or language they learn afterwards. That’s how we understand accents” (Young, 64 ). Instead of presenting the mixing of languages with the dominant standard language as something forbidden, these scholars instead present it as something that is natural, and something that helps us understand one another and our backgrounds.

However, not everyone is going to share this same outlook as Young. Stanley Fish, a legal scholar, literary theorist, author and public intellectual, makes his argument in favor of language substitution in his three-piece New York Times essays titled “What Should Colleges Teach.” He first states that college students do not know how to write a clean English paper, and stresses how important it is for all students to be grammatically correct when they are writing. Fish argues that instructors are not properly teaching students how to write clean papers. He states that courses that are about writing should be exclusively on writing and how to properly write, read, and speak through standard language, and that if they have any other focus, then they cannot be considered a legitimate course on composition (Fish). Fish also states that just because these students’ previous teachers failed to teach this to them does not mean that college professors should devalue its significance and abandon their responsibility of teaching their students standard language. He shares:

First, you must clear your mind of the orthodoxies that have taken hold in the composition world. The main orthodoxy is nicely encapsulated in this resolution adopted in 1974 by the Conference on College Composition and Communication: “We affirm the students’ right to their own patterns and varieties of language — the dialects of their nurture or whatever dialects in which they find their own identity and style (Fish).

Fish is suggesting that even though the CCCC has affirmed that students have the right to their own dialect in composition, this is false, that the two should remain separate and their instructors should refrain from thinking that their students do have this right. He also states that students are too infected with the simplistic egalitarianism of soft multiculturalism to declare that they have a right to their own language (Fish). The instructor then should “fake it” when assuring the student has rights by saying, they do have a right, and no one is taking their language from them, and that they’re only trying to teach them a new one. Fish then adds that no one will oppose learning another language, so they will be able to teach students this new (standard) language without opposition. I personally have never experienced an instructor telling me they are teaching me a “new language.” However, ever since I moved to this country from Jamaica, I have been told how to “properly” speak even after I stopped using my Jamaican dialect. I believe after you start changing how you speak, you lose part of yourself, even if you just limit your dialect in only certain settings. I made the decision when I was younger to change how I spoke so that I could be more acceptable to this new environment. This became consequential because I have not been able to use my Jamaican dialect the same ever since; so I cannot say that I agree with Fish’s argument that no one is taking a student’s language away from them.

Young also rejects Fish’s claims about a student’s right to their own language in his article “Should Writers Use They Own English”, as Young sees things through a different scope. What Young believes Fish really is implying when he asked his rhetorical question about languages is, “that the “multiculturals” should be thrilled to leave they own dialect and learn another one, the one he promote” (Young, 63). Young is suggesting that Fish is arguing that he sees Standard English as a superior to Black English, and that African Americans should be content with abandoning their previous dialect so that they can learn a new and improved one. Young argues back to the claim of code meshing, where he questions that, if we should be happy to learn another dialect, then shouldn’t everyone learn each other’s dialects equally? He states that everyone should learn as many dialects as they can, so that all will have an open-mind to mixing these different languages in oral and written communication (Young 63).

Does Code-Switching Actually Protect African- Americans From Prejudice?
Stanley Fish argues that people make the mistake of creating statements implicating a sociological or political analysis in the teaching of substitution in code switching (Fish). But after saying he agrees that standard language is a form of power and a device that protects the status quo, he then cites the sociological or political statement, which is that:

Students who are being prepared for entry into the world as it now is rather than the world as it might be in some utopian imagination — all dialects equal, all habit of speech and writing equally rewarded. You’re not going to be able to change the world if you are not equipped with the tools that speak to its present condition. You don’t strike a blow against a power structure by making yourself vulnerable to its prejudices. (V.F. Kinloch, “Revisiting the Promise of Students’ Right to Their Own Language,” CCC 57:1, September 2005).

I personally find this quote quite offensive, as Fish is arguing that those that believe that all dialects, speech habits, and writing are equal, are thinking of an idealistic world where everything is perfect. He is therefore straightforwardly implying that the Standard English is superior. I know that society does not look at the two dialects equally, however, this view should not be stated as idealistic, as it cannot be attainable. Fish is implying that there is only one way to speak “right” to get ahead in the real world and that black students do not have the right to their own language if that language is making them “vulnerable to prejudice.” Young also disagrees with this argument, as he believes that Fish is trying to “take the nation back in time”, to where society was less tolerant of linguistic and racial differences (Young, 61). Also, although Fish talks explicitly about language differences and not racial differences, the two are still intertwined. So if one is being implied, the other will most likely be implied as well. It also should be addressed that someone’s dialect, language, or style does not make them “vulnerable” to prejudice,” it is instead the attitudes of people with power and how they perceive other people’s language that creates prejudice. Black English does not make itself become self- oppressed, it is instead, the negative views that people have about other people using their own language, like the views that Fish expressed throughout his New York Times writing.

Consequently, when African Americans do follow what Fish suggests, they are still vulnerable to prejudice, as the discrimination that African American students receive goes deeper than just language, as found in Peter W. Cookson and Caroline Hodges Persell’s journal article, “Race and Class in America’s Preparatory Boarding Schools: African Americans as the “Outsiders Within.”” Cookson and Persell talk about how life is for minorities, specifically African American students, attending elite preparatory boarding schools. They also talk about how they are being faced with double marginalization and double stratification, and that no matter what they do, or how they speak, they will be seen as outsiders, even after all their efforts of trying to be accepted in the inner group. Cookson and Peresell also argue that when African American students do this they often have to give up a part of themselves to fit into this white upper class world, which is damaging to their mental state because they can only act the part, they will never be accepted in.

For example, preparatory schools are closed institutions that are white majority, and usually for the children of the upper class; very few African American students are usually accepted on a scholarship basis. However, since they are black, the chance of them being fully accepted by upper- class culture is highly unlikely, making them “outsiders within” despite their instrumental achievements (Cookson and Persell, 225). While attending an elite school, or a majority white school, African American students have to carry the burden of acting “White” and upper class, and therefore they often use the Standard English that Fish implies they should use to not become “vulnerable to prejudice.” Yet, the problem is not only with language. Attending an elite school as a minority often distances African- American students from their parents and friends, therefore, they are not able to fully participate in either lifestyles. Although they won’t be accepted into the group of the upper class, African Americans are still pressured to give up a significant part of themselves in order to keep the interest of the group, which would be including their dialect. Even for African Americans students that later become occupationally successful, lingering prejudice still remains very present. It is stated in the article, “it is possible to be instrumentally and culturally empowered through the possession of a prep school diploma and still be economically and socially disempowered because of one’s class or racial position” (Cookson and Persell, 223). This quote therefore proves that African Americans will be “vulnerable to prejudice” no matter what language they may use. Thus, doing what Fish suggests will only increase the sense of isolation, and show more fully their need to exercise firm control over themselves, their lives, and their language.

Conclusion
Not all educators or institutions that support the conversion definition of code switching are conscious supporters of racism. Nevertheless, the fundamental racism of code switching cannot be denied; it sees Black English as inappropriate and informal. It discriminates against black dialect, and further marginalized African Americans students in educational institutions by saying that “your dialect does not belong here.” Instead of instructing students how they should speak or write, we should instead teach how language functions within and from various cultural perspectives, especially given that we live in a country that is so diverse. We should teach what it takes to understand, listen, and write in multiple dialects simultaneously, and recognize how to blend dialects like the blending of Standard English and black vernacular that most African Americans speak. We need to enlarge our perspective on what is “good writing”. We should accept Black English as a language, reject linguistic shame, push African American students to be proficient in both language sets in all environments, and not reject people just because of how they speak.

Works Cited
Alridge, Derrick P. “On the Education of Black Folk: W. E. B. Du Bois and the Paradox of Segregation.” The Journal of African American History, vol. 100, no. 3, 2015, pp. 473–493.
Cookson, Peter W., and Caroline Hodges Persell. “Race and Class in America’s Elite Preparatory Boarding Schools: African Americans as the ‘Outsiders Within.’” The Journal of Negro Education, vol. 60, no. 2, 1991, pp. 219–228.
Dunn, Patricia A., and Kenneth Lindblom. “Why Revitalize Grammar?” The English Journal, vol. 92, no. 3, 2003, pp. 43–50.
Fish, Stanley. “What Should Colleges Teach? – The New York Times.” The New York Times Opinionator, 24 Aug. 2009.
Young, Vershawn Ashanti. “‘Nah, We Straight’: An Argument Against Code Switching.” JAC, vol. 29, no. 1/2, 2009, pp. 49–76.
Young, Vershawn A. “Should Writers Use They Own English?.” Iowa Journal of Cultural Studies 12 (2010): 110-117.

2019 Editor’s Introduction

“Dear writing… I hate you. But I love you. I hate that I love you.” In a humorous and shrewd series of love (and break-up) letters, Ogadimma Ebele captures the affective, on-again, off-again nature of writing, and offers a fitting introduction this second issue of Undercurrents. In this dynamic collection of student work, we see ample evidence of the ethical dimensions of writing, rhetoric, and literacy. “Every time we write,” as rhetorician John Duffy reminds us, “we propose a relationship with others.” As the work of this issue demonstrates, acts of writing, language use, and the teaching of writing and language are not neutral. Our ways with words (and other communicative symbols) can forge human connections and enrich our thinking, but they can also reinforce injustice and, at times, threaten our very lives.

Two authors in this issue compellingly turn the spotlight on the language and literacy classroom, considering the ethics and politics of classroom practices. Nayelis Guerrero considers the cultural and social contexts of language learning, and offers a persuasive case for attending to cross-cultural inclusivity in the classroom as a means for facilitating English language learning. Similarly concerned with the classroom’s potential to become a site of exclusion, Siena Santos Edmunds highlights the systemic oppression that is replicated through unacknowledged biases in teaching styles and curricula, and urges teachers to reflect on and resist their own prejudices.

Three other authors represent their inquiry processes that led to critical examinations of academic literacy practices. Ashley Kim considers the cultural and cognitive benefits of language learning by questioning the decline of formal Latin instruction and presenting ample evidence to question its dismissal as an irrelevant, “dead” language. This interest in the cognitive effects of language use is echoed in Chloe Tomasetta’s essay, in which she considers whether the advancements of digital, typewritten note-taking practices favor speed at the expense of learning and memory. Rounding out this issue’s investigations of literacy learning, Abigail Pineau examines the enjoinder she had so often heard (“Read!”) and considers the personal, social, and academic benefits of reading for pleasure—and inspires the teachers and parents among us to combat readicide: the systematic killing of one’s love for reading through regimented approaches to literacy education.

Turning their inquiry outside of the classroom, other authors in this issue consider language’s world-making—and even life-threatening—powers. Brianne Riccio narrates her inquiry process, as she moves from her own annoyance with her generation’s frequent and fumbled attempts to cultivate romantic relationships toward a critical evaluation of social media’s impact on human connection. Shifting attention from the rhetorical challenges of love to the cultivation of violence, Steve Prochniak uses his personal experience as an Army Military Police Officer to investigate the rise of gun violence in the United States—and discovers that the problem is, in large part, a rhetorical one.

I invite you to witness these eight students doing more than student-ing. In considering the complex, affective, deeply personal, and thoroughly political nature of language use, these authors strive toward expanding knowledge and creating a better world. We see, in other words, students writing with authority: the antidote to write-icide.

-Lauren M. Bowen, Editor-in-Chief of Undercurrents and Director of the Composition Program

2019 Honorees

The works below were written by first-year students in the Composition Program at the University of Massachusetts Boston, selected for publication by Composition Program faculty serving on the Undercurrents editorial board. Please see our Editor’s Introduction to learn more about our 2019 issue, click About the Journal to learn more about Undercurrents, or click the links below to enjoy our 2019 selections.


Ogadimma Ebele photoOgadimma Ebele’s Letters to My Unrequited Love

“Dear Writing: We need to talk. I know we haven’t been dating for very long. But there’s something I need to tell you …”

 

 


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Nayelis Guerrero’s English Language Learners Marginalized in Classrooms

“Multilingual justice could be defined as a universal right for a person to be respected and accepted when speaking or writing in a different language in a community. ESL students often do not receive this justice.”

 

 


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Ashley Kim’s Nota Bene: A Study on Latin and its Influence

“This methodical, systematic process can train the brain of Latin pupils to not only think carefully and thoroughly in Latin, but in other intellectual channels and subjects as well.”

 

 


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Abigail Pineau’s What are the Benefits of Reading for Pleasure?

“Pleasure reading makes you better equipped to excel in academia, but pleasure reading is much more important and influential for a person’s well-being than for a person’s intellect.”

 

 


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Steve Prochniak’s American Arms: A Soldier’s Perspective

“There is no one size fits all solution, because there are too many angles to cover. If we are going to solve America’s gun violence we need many, many solutions working in tandem with one another.”

 

 


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Brianne Riccio’s Romanticized Communication: Why Does Modern Dating Suck?

“Could we consequently be sacrificing our self-sufficient independent personas for reliant co-dependence in our relationships when we rely heavily on communication through social media?”

 

 


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Siena Santos Edmunds’ The Languages We Speak and the Biases that Erase Them

“The most important things teachers can do to enhance the learning environment are to acknowledge the biases they themselves carry, and the biases that are ingrained in the teaching style and curriculum used.”

 

 


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Chloe Tomasetta’s Note-taking Is Not Universally Applicable

“Typing notes saves students time and energy inside the classroom, but what about when it comes to remembering the information outside of the classroom?”

 

 

2018 Honorees

The works below were written by first-year students in the Composition Program at the University of Massachusetts Boston, selected for publication by Composition Program faculty serving on the Undercurrents editorial board. Please see our Editor’s Introduction to learn more about our 2018 issue, click About the Journal to learn more about Undercurrents, or click the links below to enjoy our 2018 selections.


Undercurrents defaultYasmim Alves da Silva’s The Insights of Literacy

“Since my mother was the closest person related to me that was literate, her continuous absence would contribute to the way I saw literacy, as something mysterious and hard to reach out to.”
 

 


Mark Ballou

Mark Ballou’s There And Back Again: A Writer’s Tale, by a Repeat Student

“Up until this point, I had only written the way I liked to write, and it had never failed me before. Now, I had to completely adjust my writing style based on the information given to me, and who I was submitting my paper to.”
 

 


Kamla Javier

Kamla Javier’s The Good Samaritan: The Role of Religion in One’s Morality

“However, if one does not associate himself with any religion –such as atheists, agnostics and those who are simply unaffiliated – does he then possess less morality than a theist?”
 

 


Elizabeth Lefrancois

Elizabeth Lefrancois’ Profanity and Perceptions

“Although I do not swear, I find it fascinating that there are so many unseen (or maybe more accurately described as overlooked), benefits to using profane language.”
 

 


Ana Radonjic Sabbagh

Ana Radonjic Sabbagh’s A Close Look at the Function of Slang

“I see no reason to believe that slang use entails laziness, stupidity, or for lack of a better term, uneducated. In fact, I believe individuals should be impressed with what slang can achieve.”
 

 


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Eileen M. Riley’s It All Begins With a Dream

“While these ads fed women’s desires for the gender norm dictates of that post-war time in America: love, romance, fashion, and beauty, they went beyond these norms by depicting aspirational scenarios. “

2018 Editor’s Introduction

While so many aspects of my job as director of the UMass Boston Composition Program are invigorating and rewarding, reviewing the outstanding work of our students for this inaugural issue of Undercurrents has been, without question, one of the most pleasurable. This journal represents UMass Boston Composition students as they truly are, including their brilliance, their eloquence, their struggles, and their growth. Whether you are reading this journal as a fellow or prospective student, as a teacher of writing, or as a curious visitor, our hope in this and in all future issues is to present an honest celebration of the diverse voices of English 101: Composition I and English 102: Composition II. In this inaugural issue, I am struck by the fact that these students’ excellent work, as selected from a large pool of outstanding nominees, collectively represent the depth and breadth of the work our students do every semester.

Opening the issue with a dynamic pair of literacy narratives from English 101, Yasmim Alves da Silva and Mark Ballou draw on experiential knowledge to demonstrate that literacy development is deeply contextual, occurring within specific personal, social, and cultural conditions. Such reflective accounts are commonly used in college writing courses because they provide opportunities for students to develop awareness of their own learning, including what led to their arrival at the university, what choices they might make in the present, and what might help them on the road ahead.

Equally courageous in her willingness to write about her own personal experiences and deep-seated beliefs, Kamla Javier offers a critical examination of religion as a basis of morality. By considering a blend of sources, including statistical data and personal interviews, Javier’s essay illustrates that research can do more than simply “report”: it can make good on first-year composition’s ambition to help students to learn to argue logically, ethically, and generously.

Elizabeth Lefrancois’ and Ana Radonjic Sabbagh’s research essays demonstrate the program’s efforts to help students recognize writing, literacy, and language as subjects of study in their own right. In their respective studies of profanity and slang, both writers illustrate the powerful ways that language of all kinds reflects and mediates human relationships and identities.

Closing out the issue, Eileen Riley’s feminist rhetorical analysis of the Maidenform company’s “I dreamed…” print advertising campaign offers two important reminders: first, through her close study of images, that composing involves forms or modes of communication beyond the written word; and second, that rhetorical analysis can do much more than document and describe—it can also provide a critical lens for considering how everyday texts can shape beliefs about who we are, and what we might become.

Naturally, there is much more outstanding work that our students have done and continue to do in the program that is not represented in this issue. For this reason, I am eagerly looking forward to many more issues to come, in which our students will doubtlessly continue to impress, surprise, and inspire us.

-Lauren M. Bowen, Editor-in-Chief of Undercurrents and Director of the Composition Program

Note-taking Is Not Universally Applicable

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Chloe is a communications major who lives in Braintree, Massachusetts. Chloe wrote this essay in her Composition II course because she “genuinely wanted to explore the typed versus handwritten notes debate.” She said that researching this essay “gave me clarity in my preferred note-taking method,” and she adds: “I hope this essay can be helpful for students who struggle to take notes or choose a note-taking method.” Chloe loves spending time outside, as it “allows me to hear my own thoughts, which can provide clarity in my otherwise chaotic life.”


The way humans record information has changed consistently over the years due to new technology. First, there were cave walls that humans carved symbols into, then clay tablets. With many advancements in between, humans primarily came to rely on pen and paper to communicate or solidify information. Eventually, the typewriter came along which many years later advanced into a computer or laptop, many college students primary note-taking technology. Some individuals today argue that the popularity of typing information leads to lesser retention and typing notes is, therefore, worse than handwriting. When one considers typing as a new advancement in note-taking technology, are handwritten notes really better?

Students initially learn to write using a pencil and a piece of paper. Handwriting is vital when an individual learns to write for the first time or when they learn a new language with different characters such as Arabic. This has to do with the “kinesthetic process of handwriting” which is the motions that occur when one writes each individual letter (Smoker et al. 1744). One’s hand movement when writing is unique for each letter. The opposite is true for typing, each letter a student types requires the exact same motion of pressing down on a key. Although typing does require some hand movement due to each key being in a different location, the kinesthetic process is stronger for handwriting simply because each letter has a distinct shape that activates the kinesthetic process (Smoker et al. 1744). Furthermore, the movement associated with handwriting uses certain sensory organs, which allows for better memory retention compared to typing (Smoker et al. 1745). One’s sensory organs are triggered due to the kinesthetic process associated with handwriting. When one looks at the link between one’s sensory organs and the kinesthetic process, it is clear that the fluidity of handwriting notes results in better retention of the information. So why do students still rely on typing as their primary note-taking method?

When it comes to typing, students take notes faster. Therefore, typing notes allows students to copy down all of the information from a class. This is known as transcribing notes (Bui et al. 300). Wray Herbert analyzed a study done on students’ note-taking methods. When students who typed their notes were explicitly asked by researchers not to transcribe their notes, the students were unable to refrain from taking verbatim notes. Herbert concluded that there is a link between typing and transcribed notes. Since it takes students longer to handwrite notes, it is unrealistic to think that students can copy down all of the information using pen and paper. Conversely, individuals who cannot transcribe all of the information typically rely on “organized notes” which are notes that summarize key points (Bui et al. 301). It is important to note that typing is not exclusively linked to transcribed notes and that students who type can use other methods, but through my research, I found the majority of students who relied on typing their notes ended up transcribing the lecture word for word. Students tend to choose typing over handwriting their notes because typed notes saves students time and students do not miss out on any information due to the nature of their notes being verbatim. Typing notes saves students time and energy inside the classroom but what about when it comes to remembering the information outside of the classroom?

With handwriting, a student has to make choices about what is important to include in their notes. A study based on comparing organized and transcribed notes during a lecture concluded that organized notes allow the writer to conceptualize ideas and therefore possess a deeper processing level (Bui et al. 305). This is because organized notes allow the student to put the information into their own words and actively make choices in their writing. This lead me to believe that there is something about typing that is related to mindless processing whereas handwriting allows the students to reframe information into their own words by making decisions about their notes. For example, when I transitioned from high school to college, my note-taking method changed drastically. I knew that typing was faster and more organized so I decided to take all of my class notes on a laptop. On the first day of my Communication class, focused on the New Media Society, my professor blatantly recommended to my classmates and I that we should not type our notes because we will not do as well in the class. I heard this from teachers before, but I decided I should give typing a try anyway because I wanted to save time and see the results for myself. I noticed that I did take verbatim notes when typing, but my test scores did not suffer in any sense. The key was my awareness. Since I was aware that my typed notes may not be as in depth, I spent more time after class reviewing key concepts, handwriting a study guide, and creating flashcards before exams. When one looks at time spent outside the classroom, those who type their notes will need to put in more time to conceptualize ideas whereas those who handwrite their notes will conceptualize the ideas in class. This occurs because those who type can take notes at a quicker speed and therefore have time to copy down the notes word for word and those who handwrite are constrained by time. Technically, handwriting is not a time constraint because it saves time in the future whereas students who type will need to dedicate more time outside of the classroom. So far I have been discussing note-taking methods as they relate to students in general, but does considering a student’s cognitive ability change whether or not handwritten notes are better?

Cognitive abilities vary from person to person. In more simple terms, people do not think the same. Each student has a unique way of thinking about information and then processing the information in order to gain a better understanding. Although more research is needed to test student’s individual differences paired with their preferred note-taking strategy, Bui assumes that “what constitutes the most effective note-taking strategies may vary across students who differ in cognitive ability” (Bui 308). This is important when thinking about whether a student takes organized or transcribed notes. There is no ‘better’ option because not all students have the same thought processes. For example, students who take organized notes might find it easier to summarize the notes as they go along and only write down the most important ideas. On the other hand, students who transcribe their notes might enjoy knowing that they have all of the information and can refer to the facts at any given time. I argue that one’s cognitive ability is linked to their personal preference. Since a student chooses their note-taking method based off of their brains’ ability to comprehend, the student will grow to personally prefer the method that they understand the best. On the other hand, in a class focused on formulas and numbers, organization and meaning are minimal so handwritten notes are favorable (Hertogs). Additionally, in a formula based class such as math or science, students use characters and symbols that are often not easily accessible on a keyboard which results in the prevalence of handwritten notes in less word-intensive classes. A student should account for the context of their notes when determining which method produces better results. This is important because it demonstrates that there is no single note-taking strategy that will lead to success; note-taking is not universally applicable and therefore no note-taking method can be placed on a pedestal. So how do students know which note-taking method will serve them best?

Although students can choose which note-taking method they prefer for the given context paired with their cognitive abilities, it is important that students are aware of how their notes will differ in content. If a student prefers to use transcribed notes, they should be aware that simply copying notes word for word does not result in the same in-depth level of retention as organized notes. With this knowledge, an individual who transcribes notes will most likely have to put in more time when it comes to conceptualizing the material for exams or assignments. This means that the student will need to review their notes for key concepts or rewrite their notes in a more summarized manner, much like I did for my Communication class. Meanwhile, a student who prefers organized notes should be aware of how to effectively engage with the content of the lecture in order to pick up the main ideas and put the concepts into their own words. Overall, no single note-taking strategy leads to success; in each note-taking situation, students must consider their individual abilities paired with the context of the notes in order to determine which method will be most effective.

Works Cited

Bui, Dung, Joel Myerson, and Sandra Hale. “Note-Taking With Computers: Exploring Alternative Strategies for Improved Recall.” Journal of Educational Psychology, Vol. 105, No. 2, 2013, pp. 299-309.

Herbert, Wray. “Ink on Paper: Some Notes on Note-Taking.” HuffPost, 28 Jan. 2014.

Hertogs, Mathew. “Typing vs. Handwriting Notes: An Evaluation of the Effect of Transcription Method on Student Learning.” XChanges: An Interdisciplinary Journal of Technical Communication, Rhetoric, and Writing Across the Curriculum, Vol. 8, No. 2, 2019.

Smoker, Timothy, Carrie E. Murphy, and Alison K. Rockwell. “Comparing Memory for Handwriting versus Typing.” Proceedings of the Human Factors and Ergonomics Society, Vol. 53, No. 22, 2009, pp. 1744-1747.

Romanticized Communication: Why Does Modern Dating Suck?

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Brianne is a nursing major living in Holbrook, Massachusetts. Brianne wrote this essay because “dating in 2019 is insanely difficult and more complicated than it has to be,” and she admits that her research revealed “more faults in my own personal dating life and mentality than I had previously known.” Brianne is deeply passionate about caring for others, and enjoys writing both as a way to help her relieve her own emotional burdens and as a way to connect with other people.


I have been having the hardest time creating quality friendships and relationships. We live in such a fast paced world, where everything is so immediate and everyone says “I want it right now and I am going to get it right now.” That attitude may be great for certain things, but not everything. I have felt lately that these fast paced, easy access apps and knowledge that our phones offer us has been shaping and molding the current generation to become dissatisfied if things do not come quickly. This is where I found I was dissatisfied: I personally do not want that quickness in my personal relationships. Men whom I do not even know, walk up and ask for my number. Most call it “shooting your shot”; I call it disgusting. When did hookup culture, dating apps, and speed dating become a social norm? When did “messing around” in college become the determining factor of your college experience?

Maybe I should be flattered when a guy runs up to me begging for a chance, but I do not want that quick relationship or quick hookup. So why does it seem like everyone around me wants that style of dating? This whole topic got me thinking: why does my generation suck at dating? I was unaware that when I began studying at a university for my bachelors degree in Nursing, I would be signing myself up to be bombarded with aspiring bachelors as well. In a broader sense, what exactly has caused the current generation to be addicted to communication via social media, but somehow be left feeling unsatisfied with dating? Could these issues be linked to the way we “communicate” through social media?

I have not been the only person contemplating these questions about modern methods of dating. With many advances, whether they be technological, social, industrial, or ecological, comes the opportunity for many setbacks and disadvantages, those of which may have been unforeseen at the start. Having social media, the internet, and cell phones, all of which we would consider advantages, has led many speculations and studies to be done on the effects of using those things constantly. Every generation has its issues, that is undeniable, but with something as obvious as the development and popularity of social media influencing only the youth of this generation, it may very well be an easy scapegoat for all the new issues developing.

Through research, as I assumed, I find that the majority of young adults use social media everyday. According to a study conducted at the University of Montana in 2016, 90% of young adults ages 18-29 use social media (Vaterlaus et al, 594). And a recent study, “I Just Text to Say I Love You” found that undergraduate college students are likely to spend a daily average of 90 minutes just sending texts (Ohadi). As you can see, a lot of young adults use their cell phones to communicate. Within social media, young adults are posting, direct messaging, Snapchating, liking, swiping, and retweeting. Something so constant in the lives of adolescents must have an effect on their personality, as well as, their relationships. Through these forms of social media, relationships can be made, maintained, enhanced, or damaged.

The study conducted by Montana State University had adolescents ages 18-29 report their perceived influences of Snapchat on their inter-personal relationships. The young adults in this study were found to report that they believed social media affects their relationships, both negatively and positively (Vaterlaus et al, 595). The researchers found that closeness and trust are two common findings associated with the enhancement of relationships through Snapchat. Deviant behavior, attachment, loneliness, and jealousy are common findings that would be considered negative impacts of communicating through social media (598). These results show that the effects of communicating through our phones is not undetectable; adolescents are aware of its influence. Could closeness in this case, be entirely emotional, void-filling, and situational? Is this closeness synonymous with the intimacy that we crave in our personal relationships? From a survey I created for this study, 87.5% of the sample size of 25 college students said they felt closer to people when they were constantly communicating with them via social media. But with the removal of social media communication, would the closeness in these adolescent relationships still remain? We say social media makes us feel close, but lonely; trusting, but jealous. We say we like the closeness, but hate the attachment. Do we experience these contradictions together, or one after the other? Could we consequently be sacrificing our self-sufficient independent personas for reliant co-dependence in our relationships when we rely heavily on communication through social media? The “deviant behavior” promoted through Snapchat, known among young adults as the “nudes app”, is a factor that cannot be ignored (598). I cannot remember the last time someone ran up to me naked, but the amount of nude pictures circling the internet is shocking. What I found was that this study about Snapchat lacked a solid conclusion on whether these influences truly affected the personalities of young adults outside of social media.

With the responses from the study conducted at the University of Minnesota, can we safely assume that the positive and negative effects are only influencing young adults when they are looking at their phones and texting their friends and significant others? Research shows that the way we use social media affects not only the way we communicate online, but in person too. According to “Texting’s Consequences for Romantic Relationships”, a study by Daniel Halpern and James Katz, about the influences texting has on romantic relationships, texting style and behavior have a direct influence on couple’s satisfaction in their relationship. The study found that constant communication among couples decreased intimacy and led individuals to have a false sense of availability from their partners (Halpern and Katz 387). Having absolute access, or what we believe to be absolute access, to our partners through social media can lead to the assumption that they are always there, and therefore creates an over-dependency that can be toxic. This availability social media presents us with, is causal to satisfaction, because of course our significant others are not always available to us (391). Intimacy is decreased due to these unfulfilled expectations. This idea promotes the same false sense of closeness, and once again contradicts the textbook level intimacy we crave.

But what happens when the influence of social media on your relationships is a constant, bombarding banner notification flashing across your screen, and a ding every time it wants your attention? You can only compartmentalize for so long, assuming such behavior in one aspect of your life will not seep into other parts of your life is seen to be far from the truth. The fast-paced “I want it now” attitude that social media has promoted and allowed for, is seeping into the real lives and actions of young adults.

Although the alleged closeness is a desired outcome of using social media to support your relationships, try getting closer to someone who does not actually exist outside of your phone. No, this is not cat-fishing exactly, but it might as well be. The usage of social media has allowed our generation to pick and choose the parts of ourselves we wish others to see.The texts we send are premeditated, and at times not even naturally occurring. Our social media profiles and conversations are not all encompassing, they are very selective. We showcase the good parts, and only what we want others to see. According to the article “Modern Dating”, “The goal is to appear approachable yet guarded. Uninterested yet very interested. Aloof but passionate. It’s all so premeditated and contradictory” (“Modern Dating”). This means that by having profiles that we can choose and photos we can edit, we are creating an ideal version of ourselves. At some point, we began cowardly hiding our true selves behind filters and captions and pickup lines, marketing ourselves as perfect beings, when in reality we are quite the opposite of perfect. Everything we do through social media is selective, all for our personal benefit. We want to maintain an image, even in our relationships. We cannot respond too quickly or we are clingy; we cannot respond too slowly or we risk losing the interest of our partner. I can attest to that selective self-marketing social media allows. This filtering of not just our faces, but our lives, creates a rift in intimacy that almost mimics building a relationship on outright lies.

Also stated by Mark Podesta and Amy Nunes from the article “Modern Dating”, “Texting can be so noncommittal. You can easily guard yourself from the vulnerability of an in person conversation” (“Modern Dating”). In summary, this article explains that there is a vulnerability in face-to-face interaction, a certain feeling of butterflies that cannot be felt through a direct message inbox or a Snapchat that disappears in five seconds (“Modern Dating”). This has left me to wonder that if as a generation, we are too afraid of commitment and confrontation to live without a screen protecting us from our own truths. We are hiding behind our phones, swiping left and right; yet we are too afraid to date and we are too afraid to show who we truly are.

The purpose of my research is not to pick out every flaw of my generation, as there are some positive findings related to social media usage and relationships. Although I fear, the positives only strengthen the negatives in the end. As found by a cohort study “Young Adults’ Use of Commnication Technology Within Their Romantic Relationships and Associations with Attachment Style, conducted in 2011 to analyze how attachment style affected young adults who use social media, “Electronic communication is also found to enhance mutual self-disclosure and emotional intimacy, and greater cell phone use among college students with a romantic partner was associated with more love and commitment and decreased relational uncertainty” (1772). There is a feeling of non-judgement in electronic communication. I have found even within my own life, that at times it is easier to write something than to speak it. A lot of young people feel that way, as seen in this cohort study. The adolescents surveyed in the study also reported feeling emotional intimacy between them and their partners when communicating through their phones (1774). I question again the stability of such intimacy, when it is premeditated. A finding within this cohort that is new to my research is the idea that there is a correlation between satisfaction in the relationship and electronic communication. “Decreased relational uncertainty” is a strong point I would like to address, with the same critical view I did with the closeness it claimed (1772). The decreased uncertainty is merely socially enforced. People have been completely satisfied with their relationships for centuries without social media. Technology can enhance relationships, as I mentioned previously we should use the advantages given to us, but our relationship satisfaction should not depend on that form of constant communication, for then we risk dependency and loss of self.

That being said, the enhancement of our relationships through social media communication is very common today. Are you truly in a relationship if you do not post that envied (more like hated) couple-kissing selfie? Did you change your relationship status on Facebook? Does your entire following base on Instagram know you are taken? We vocalize our relationships through pictures and statuses. Yet as research has shown, we are building relationships that do not function outside of technology. As a result of our addiction to closeness via social media, we romanticize the following as if they are new and special: a call on the phone, being able to hold a conversation, our significant other asking us about our day, someone asking you questions about yourself with the goal of just getting to know you, actually asking you out on a date, making an effort to see you once a week. Hate to break it to half of the girls I know, but those are all bare-minimum, expected efforts. Yet here we are romanticizing that communication. Communication is an action. Just as selective as we are when online dating, we are selectively choosing communication to be solely texting, emailing, calling, Tweeting, writing, Snapchatting, and posting. We forget communication is happening outside of our phones.

From the results of my research, dating sucks today because we market perfection knowing how far from it we truly are, while simultaneously expecting perfection from others. We romanticize perfect moments and effort, when dating and life are far from perfect. We assume immediate gratification of our needs, because the gratification on our phones is so instant. Can I blame the boy running up to me for my number, when he is so used to immediate responses to his Snapchat posts? Can I judge the girl who dragged her breakup out for three months, when she just missed the constant notifications and having someone to text 24-7? There are many positive results to using social media in personal relationships, but the negative effects exist as well. In conclusion, I believe communication is stronger and weaker than it has ever been for this generation. The strength is in the frequency and the simplicity of technology; the weakness is in ourselves. As one thing does not create addiction, but stimulates an addictive personality, the same way technology amplifies personality traits we already possess. Insecurities are amplified, and vulnerabilities are unmasked, but is that not the risk we take in dating anyway?

Works Cited

Halpern, Daniel, and James Katz. “Texting’s Consequences for Romantic Relationships: A Cross-lagged Analysis Highlights Its Risks.” Computers in Human Behavior 71 (2017): 386-94.

Morey, Jennifer N., Amy L. Gentzler, Brian Creasy, Ann M. Oberhauser, and David Westerman. “Young Adults’ Use of Communication Technology within Their Romantic Relationships and Associations with Attachment Style.” Computers in Human Behavior 29.4 (2013): 1771-1778.

“Modern Dating.” UWIRE Text, 12 Mar. 2014, p. 1. Academic OneFile. Accessed 14 May 2019.

Ohadi, Jonathan, Brandon Mulloy Brown, Leora Trub, and Lisa Rosenthal. “I Just Text to Say I Love You: Partner Similarity in Texting and Relationship Satisfaction.” Computers in Human Behavior 78 (2018): 126-32.

Riccio, Brianne. “Online Dating” Survey. May 1, 2019.

Vaterlaus, J. Mitchell, Kathryn Barnett, Cesia Roche, and Jimmy A. Young. “Snapchat Is More Personal”: An Exploratory Study on Snapchat Behaviors and Young Adult Interpersonal Relationships.” Computers in Human Behavior 62 (2016): 594-601.

What are the Benefits of Reading for Pleasure?

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Abigail is a nursing major living in Weymouth, Massachusetts. Abigail enjoys reading for pleasure, but before researching this essay she “never knew just how impactful it was.” She said that after researching this subject it became “important for me that students and parents know just how impactful pleasure reading is.” In addition to reading, Abigail’s other passion is nursing, as she loves both helping people in need and learning how we function as humans.


As children, we are taught by our parents and teachers that we should read outside of class to get smarter. And so, we read. But do we actually get smarter? I was curious as to what the benefits of pleasure reading are. In my research, I looked for the academic benefits that result from pleasure reading, but I only found a few studies about the academic benefit. What was interesting to me was that most studies and articles were conducted with social and personal benefits of pleasure reading in mind. According to the research I have done, our teachers and parents might have actually been wrong.

In order for pleasure reading to be considered pleasurable, you cannot be forced to read; it must be a personal decision. Jennifer and Ponniah (2015), who focus on the academic benefits of pleasure reading, wrote that if a student does not feel that they have autonomy over their reading choices then it will not be pleasurable to them (p. 3). According to Research Evidence (2012) the more someone reads, the more they like to read, and the more that person will benefit from it (p. 3). I agree with this but it needs to be emphasized that this only works if the reader experiences pleasure. I believe that if you are forced to read, much like academic reading, you will not receive any of these benefits. You need to be excited to read and curious about the text, you need to get pleasure from the text you are reading.

In 2016, Wilhelm and Smith conducted a study because they were curious about what types of pleasure teenagers get when they read books that are typically frowned upon by parents and teachers (i.e. romances, vampire stories, horror, dystopian fiction, and fantasy). They interviewed 8th graders about why they read, what the feel when they read and how it connects to their lives. Through these interviews, Wilhelm and Smith concluded that there are 4 kinds of pleasure a reader gets from pleasure reading: play, intellect, social, and work (p. 25).

Wilhelm and Smith (2016) believe that the pleasure you get from reading something you like is similar to the pleasure you get from playing (p. 27). Wilhelm and Smith assigned the phrase “pleasure of play” (p. 27) to this concept. The concept that Wilhelm and Smith call “the pleasure of play,” Jennifer and Ponniah (2015) call “aesthetic reading” (p. 2). These terms can be used interchangeably. Aesthetic reading is basically the feeling a reader gets when they find a book that they can’t put down; this feeling is what is considered the pleasure factor in pleasure reading. According to Wilhelm and Smith, feeling is a prerequisite to the other three pleasures: intellect, work and social. I absolutely agree with this because when I read, a book is not pleasurable to me unless I feel that I can’t put it down. If a student does not have this ‘pleasure of play’, I do not think it should be considered pleasure reading.

I love the concept of social pleasure, it is so relevant and very apparent, at least it is in my life. Wilhelm and Smith (2016) define social pleasure as connecting to others and identifying yourself through pleasure reading (p. 28). To me one form of social pleasure is when a reader either finishes a book or a chapter and instantly feels the need to talk to someone about it. I experience this with every pleasure book I read, but the most mind-blowing book I read that had this social effect is called We Were Liars by E. Lockhart. This is the first example that comes to mind when I think of social pleasure, but there are many more. Another possible way of experiencing social pleasure is seeing someone holding a book that you are also reading or that you have read, and feeling compelled to go over to them and to talk to them about the book. This connection could spark a friendship.

Social pleasure could also influence someone to read a book. I started reading because I heard my friends talk constantly about The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins. I started to feel left out, so I picked up the book and this caused me to be the bookworm I am today. Jennifer and Ponniah (2015) theorize that if a non-reader socializes with a pleasure-reader about a book they have not read, it may prompt them to read that book to feel included (p. 3). This can cause a new reader to begin to like reading rather than experiencing more typical negative feelings towards reading. Negative feelings or hatred towards reading can be counteracted with a basic theory developed by Jennifer and Ponniah, the theory that pleasure reading can cure readicide (p. 1). Jennifer and Ponniah define readicide as a “systematic killing of the love for reading” ( p. 1). This means that through various methods, people, usually teachers, unknowingly kill the love of reading for their students. This may occur through requiring students to read academic texts. Academic texts make students feel too much anxiety since the students may not understand the texts on their own because the books are usually at a higher reading level. Jennifer and Ponniah believe that pleasure reading cures readicide because the “curiosity of the content presented in texts”, often influenced by a social experience, creates a “[sustained] interest and extends the time devoted for reading” (p. 2). So basically, if you read a text that is interesting to you, there is a higher chance you will continue to read for pleasure.

I think the most important pleasure, or benefit that a student can receive from pleasure reading is the pleasure of work. Wilhelm and Smith (2016), talk about a physical work and an inner work (p. 29). To me, the inner work of a reader is far more important than physical work. Physical work is when you read a text and use it to accomplish something (p. 29), but I think this rarely occurs, unless you are in a specific workplace or class that requires outside reading. On the other hand, inner work is when someone tries to change to become the best version of themselves (p. 29). I often experience inner work by putting myself in a character’s shoes. It is beneficial to see other people’s perspective as this perspective may influence the way a reader sees the world and views other people’s lives. Venning (2015) states that placing yourself in other’s shoes will increase a readers’ empathy because they may learn something about various hardships a person may go through. I would have never known what it was like to live with short term memory loss, or to walk around with a birthmark covering half of my face without reading the One Memory of Flora Banks by Emily Barr or North of Beautiful by Justina Chen. Knowing that someone’s life is different than your own can create an empathetic person. This type of inner work is usually done unknowingly. But, you can also knowingly take part in inner work where you try to better yourself as a whole. A reader can also experience inner work by reading self-help books where they purposefully try to better themselves. This book genre has become very popular and is very beneficial to the reader in terms of inner work.

I think that most people start to read and continue the hobby because it is very calming. Venning (2015) states that pleasure reading reduces anxiety. The fact that pleasure reading reduces anxiety is important because everyone has stressors in their life like money, jobs, and school; pleasure reading can help take your mind off of these stressors. Pleasure reading is known to put forth a calming energy. It is almost like you are in your own little bubble when you read. This calmness that one experiences can reduce anxiety for the time that a person is pleasure reading. This is one of the reasons that I continued to pleasure read. When I read, I don’t think about any stressors in my life like grades, money or fitting in. When I read a good book, I solely think about the book’s characters and what is happening in their life rather than mine. The book may even be a stressful book-maybe it is a thriller or a character is going through a breakup-but what is calming and stress reducing about it is that you are not dwelling on a stressor in your own life.

According to Wilhelm and Smith’s (2016) four pleasures, only one pleasure affects a person’s intelligence, which is “intellectual pleasure” (p. 27). This shows how much more of an impact pleasure reading is on the student themselves than on their academic life. This is not to say that there are no academic benefits to pleasure reading, the social and personal benefits just outweigh the academic benefits. The academic benefits of pleasure reading are enhancing vocabulary, grammar, spelling, comprehension, exam scores and reading strategies.

Jennifer and Ponniah (2015), Research Evidence (2012) and Wilhelm and Smith (2016) all believe that comprehension skills (i.e. vocabulary, grammar, spelling etc.) are improved when a student pleasure reads. When a reader comes across a term in an academic text that is either the same or similar to a word they have read when pleasure reading, they have a higher chance of correctly defining and comprehending the word, which leads to a better comprehension of the text. This is because the reader will be familiar with the word and its meaning through pleasure reading (Jennifer and Ponniah, 2015, p. 4) which will in turn make the student comprehend the academic text better, as a whole. This comprehension does not stop at vocabulary, grammar and spelling; pleasure reading also helps with comprehension on academic exams (Research Evidence, 2012, p. 9).

According to Research Evidence (2012) pleasure readers are better exam takers than non-pleasure readers(p. 11),. Students who read information-based sources rather than pleasure books “tended to have lower attainment” (or comprehension); those who read for information (not pleasure) only once or twice a month score higher than those who read for information every day. Put another way, it is better for the reader to read pleasurable texts than academic texts when it comes to performing well on exams. This is because when students try to read academic texts without the guidance of a teacher, they will confuse themselves and may not retain the information as easily as a student who pleasure reads would without a teacher to guide them (Jennifer and Ponniah, 2015, pg. 4). And when it comes to applying what you have learned from either pleasure reading or academic reading, the pleasure reading will be much easier to apply since the reader had a much easier time understanding it and analyzing it. On the other hand, if you are asked to analyze an academic text, it will most likely be much harder.

Jennifer and Ponniah (2015) claim that the current testing strategies used in schools negatively affects pleasure reading and causes readicide in students (p. 2). This may be the result of being taught a “graded orientation” rather than a “learning orientation”. A grading orientation is when students read something and memorize it for a short amount of time to get a good grade and a learning orientation is when students read something and understand it to remember forever (p. 2). This graded orientation often comes from the exam taking strategies students are taught. Students are often taught to temporarily learn the topics rather than to comprehend them and to remember them. Pleasure reading helps students to comprehend texts, whether are for pleasure or academic purposes, so if a student pleasure reads they are able to test better than their non-reader peers. The students who do not pleasure read also shallow read rather than deep reading to pass a class. According to Jennifer and Ponniah deep reading is when a student analyzes a text and retains the information presented to them (p. 2). Shallow reading is deep reading’s counterpart; when students do not analyze texts nor retain the information. This often looks like skipping over hard-to-comprehend parts. Non-reader students who have not been taught or have not learned how to analyze and comprehend higher level texts would typically just skip over that section or reading. Although, if these students pleasure read, they would be better equipped to comprehend these harder sections and will succeed more than their non-reader peers.

The theory, presented by Jennifer and Ponniah (2015) that pleasure reading aids in the ability to comprehend academic texts, also results in improving a student’s mental health (p. 3). According to Venning (2015) pleasure reading helps to reduce anxiety. If a student is better able to understand and remember a text, they will have an easier time during tests, when writing papers, and even just when reciting something from the text. This ease will take away some of the anxiety associated with accomplishing these tasks. Anxiety levels can also become lower because a student will be more inclined to pick a book that is at their reading level, not higher. When a book is above a student’s reading level, the student will struggle to deep read and will create anxiety when trying to comprehend it (Jennifer and Ponniah, 2015, p. 3). So, it should be recommended to the student to read at their level when pleasure reading, and when the student takes on more daunting texts like the ones given in school, they will be better prepared and therefore less anxious when they are required to take a test, write a paper, or to perform a speech about these texts.

So, were our parents and teachers wrong to believe that pleasure reading makes you smarter? I don’t think so. Yes, you do technically get smarter. Pleasure reading makes you better equipped to excel in academia, but I don’t think we should focus on the getting smarter part of pleasure reading. From what I have learned and experienced, pleasure reading is much more important and influential for a person’s well-being than for a person’s intellect. Pleasure reading should be encouraged by parents and teachers, not just because it makes you smarter, but because it makes you a better person overall.

References
Jennifer, J., & Ponniah, R. (2015). Pleasure Reading Cures Readicide and Facilitates Academic Reading. Journal on English Language Teaching, 5(4), 1-5.

Venning, L. (2015). Why is Reading for Pleasure Important?. Retrieved from https://readingagency.org.uk/news/blog/why-is-reading-for-pleasure-important.html

Wilhelm, J. D., & Smith, M. W. (2016). The Power of Pleasure Reading: What We Can Learn From the Secret Reading Lives of Teens. English Journal, 105(6), 25-30.

Letters to My Unrequited Love

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Ogadimma is a political science major living in Hyde Park, Massachusetts. Writing is her passion and she credits this assignment with helping to further her composition skills. In 2019, she plans to focus all of her energy on pursuing her dream of landing a career in comedy writing.


December 1, 2018

Dear Writing,

We need to talk. I know we haven’t been dating for very long. But there’s something I need to tell you. I love you. And I don’t mean that in a perfunctory way. I mean that in a real way. I am absolutely in love with you. And I hope that doesn’t scare you away. It’s just that I’ve never felt this way about anyone else. You may think I’m moving too fast, but my feelings for you are never going to go away. I love everything about you.

You let me say what I really mean, and no one can tell me that I’m wrong. I can take one idea and manipulate it in several different ways. Simpleton versus fool. Tetchy versus irritable. I can make people feel what I want them to feel— sad or happy, angry or enlightened. I love that I can determine how people are going to interpret you. What thoughts they are going to have when they walk away from you. What questions they are going to ask themselves when they are done with you. I have the control. I can maneuver all the controls on the ship: tone, syntax, word choice, style, and everything between the lines.

There are so many ways I can enhance you, and no one has ever granted me such flexibility. I can make my sentences short. And abrupt. To illustrate something jarring. Or impactful. Or, I can make my sentences long, and extensive, to illustrate something exhausting, or draining. I can obey some of your rules— like using commas, whenever I want the reader to pause, or if I want to introduce a list, or I feel the phrase is too long. Or I can totally break your rules and not use commas if I want the reader to feel anxious or confused or fearful or scatterbrained or neither of these things or all of these things.

I love you. I love that you are education in its most primary form. With you, I have the freedom to teach or be taught. You are so primitive, yet so contemporary. So fundamental, yet so essential. And I know this may be a lot to take in. But I would really like to know if you feel the same way. And I can’t wait until the next mailing cycle. Meet me at our special publishing house this weekend. Please. I need a definite answer.

Love,
Ogadimma Ebele

P.S I would really appreciate if you would print out beforehand. Sometimes I can’t read you. 😉


December 5, 2018

Dear Writing,

That was rude. I told you to meet up with me, but you never showed. I told you to give me an answer, but I never got one. I was sitting there waiting and waiting for you. Waiting for to you tell me I’m beautiful. For you to take me in your arms. For us to go on a second date. And a third. And a fourth. But. . .

You never came. Why didn’t you come? I thought we were going to grow old together. If you didn’t like me, you could’ve just said that. Instead of breaking my heart.

I saw this coming. I should’ve known better. I’m so stupid. Why did I let myself fall for you?

I guess. . . I just thought. . . it would be different this time. I thought I was unique. I thought you would actually like me. I thought my ideas were actually good enough. But I guess they’re not. Not for you at least.

I hate you. I had a goal. And you ruined it. I had a plan. Now I’m not even sure about it. Now I’m not even sure about you. Why did you step on my heart? Why would you tell me one thing them do the next? You’re so unreliable. Nothing about you is definite. You’re just like your process, recursive. You have no linear direction. No order. I’m constantly just wandering around in circles hoping that the master idea will come to me. Screw that. Screw you. I don’t need you. I don’t need your approval. I know I’m great, and I know my ideas are great. And if you’re too stupid to share them with everyone one else then. . . Screw. You.

I bet you don’t even know what the master idea is. You probably think you’re some holier than thou intellect. Well you’re not. Because if you were really that smart, you would know that there is no master idea. You would know that style is subjective. You would know that what appeals to one audience, may not appeal to the next. You would know that you are supposed to be for teaching purposes, not superficial ones.

And you’re probably going to hit me with that stupid line— It’s not about what other people think. Shut up. Why would I be interested if I didn’t want the world to hear my voice? The whole point is to teach people— help people. God, you’re so frustrating, in every which way that you operate. How do you expect me to master you? There are not enough hours in the day. You’re impossible. I hate you. And I’m giving up on you.

(Not) Sincerely,
Ogadimma Ebele

P.S That font looks atrocious on you. Even Comic Sans says so. And he’s the ugliest of them all.


December 10, 2018

Dear Writing,

I take that back. I can’t give up on you. I won’t give up on you. Because I still love you. I still love everything about you. Even your never-ending back and forth process. Even your strict demand for practice and discipline. I still love you. I still love you despite your vexing uncertainty.

I love you because you are the only thing that I have a passion for. Which is why I hate your lack of practicality.

What’s wrong with me? Why am I drawn to you? You of all people. I could’ve been with Computer-Science or Engineering. Mummy even wanted me to date Nursing, but I turned him down. For you. Because you’re not strict and one-answered like them. I don’t have to figure out your solution. I am the solution. My words. My voice. I love you, I really do. I just hate that you’re so unreliable. Why must you be one of the very, very, very few people that I am actually interested in?

Look I’m sorry about earlier. I really do care about you. But it’s just so hard because no matter what, I always do something wrong. Change this Omit that This isn’t suitable for your audience This isn’t the appropriate word to use This sentence isn’t preserving your purpose This phrase is too confusing Rewrite this paragraph Scratch that paragraph Matter of fact change your whole idea and start over from the beginning. All these expectations make my head spin. But, there’s no way to get around them. Sometimes I wonder if I’m even good enough. If I should even bother.

But honestly, no matter how much I push you away, I will always find my way back to you. Because I love you. Whenever I’m with you I can’t stop smiling. And when I’m not with you I can’t stop thinking about you. No matter how much I try to take interest in other people, you will always be the one. I will never be truly satisfied without you.

I know you’re nothing like your counterparts, but I need you. So, can’t you just be a little like them? You know, take a page out of their book—no pun intended. I know I said I don’t like formulas, but how many letters do I have to write for you to just give me one? Or at least a hint? A sign? Just something. Anything. Please?

Yours Truly,
Ogadimma Ebele


December 14, 2018

Dear Writing,

What I’m going to do. I hate you. But I love you. I hate that I love you. I love that I can be myself around you. No one has ever made me feel that way before. It’s the greatest gift anyone could ever ask for.

Which is why I need you. With your help, I can give that gift to other people. I can speak for those who can’t speak for themselves. I can stand up for people who don’t have the privilege that I do. I can teach the world what it desperately needs to learn. I can enlighten people. I can make a difference. I need your platform. But you don’t want to give it to me. You don’t want to help me. Why must you make it so hard for me? Did I do something wrong? Are you angry with me? You must be, because you’re constantly forcing me to prove myself. How much proving do I need to do?

Do you think that I’m just using you for your success? Because I’m not. Do you think I’m not worthy enough? Because I am.

One day you will realize how passionate I am about you. One day, you will allow me to augment the body of knowledge in the world. One day you will have the same love for me, that I have for you.

I hope so. I truly hope so. If my love for you is never returned I will be forced to feign love with someone else. If my love for you is never returned my blood, sweat, and tears will go down the drain. If my love for you is never returned my hope. . . will turn into discouragement.

My hope. . . will turn into despair. My hope. . . will turn into failure.

With you, there is a great possibility that my dream will not align with my reality. But there is also the possibility that it will. With you, there is a possibility that my words can actually make a difference. But there is also a possibility that they won’t. That my words. . . will be just that. Just words. No difference.

Just a dream. No reality.

But, I hope not. I hope one day I’ll be good enough for you. I hope one day we can finally be together.

Love,
Ogadimma Ebele

P. S Sorry about the whole font thing. Times New Roman looks good on everyone!