For the Rhetorical device essay, I plan to revise my conclusion, analysis, summary and organization. My conclusions tend to be very repetitive in essays and I am still not clear on what makes a good conclusion. I plan to add more analysis to my quotes and claims. I have a lot more summary of the texts and not as much analysis of the parts of the text I chose to analyze. I need to add more of a connection between the rhetorical devices used by the authors and how these devices contribute to effective writing. For organization I am thinking of splitting my two body paragraphs into four. Two paragraphs will be Bunn and his use of audience and ethos, pathos and logos and the other two will be Boyd and her use of audience and ethos, pathos and logos. By splitting these paragraphs, I think it will be easier for the reader to follow along with the essay as opposed to discussing two rhetorical devices in one paragraph.