After doing peer review, and work shop for the past week. This is what I’m going to revise for the full draft of my paper. I have to make the essay clearer on what I’m focusing on analyzing. I have to cut down on the topics I have in it right now and just focus on two main topics. I think for those topics I’m picking audience, and rhetorical devices specifically ethos and logos. Both Swales and Boyd have many similarities and differences in those criteria. As for what I already wrote in the essays. I need to find more evidence to support what I claimed in the essays and continue to develop my essay more. I have to finish the second half of my essay which is the analysis on Swales writing. I think that’s most of what i need to do for my essay.