After reading some of my classmates blogs, I feel good about where my essay is heading. Before when I was writing the rough draft I thought that it might be a little difficult to do the final draft because of the report like style that we were writing it in. Because of that I made sure to keep my essay on the shorter side so I can add in a good amount of analysis while keeping most of the information about the sources. With that being said, I need to go into a couple of the sources I used more thoroughly to do them justice. Also I need to go back to the original essay that is the whole reason why we are writing this one and include that as a source as well. I slighted Gilbert when he should have been one of my most heavily relied upon source. My classmates essays helped me realize what I was lacking in my essay and that it shouldn’t be hard for us to go from source summaries to slightly smaller source summaries with our own viewpoint sprinkled in as well.