Writing for Print and Online Media

UMass Boston || English 307 || Fall 2014 || Prof. Erin Anderson

Author: breadapotts001

Blog 5

All semester we have discussed in depth how to make a story interesting.  Why tell the story? Who cares? What’s the hook? What it comes down to is will the audience be involved or bored?  This is particularly relevant to the art of the profile.  The subject HAS to be intriguing or there will be no audience.  Both Goetz and Casey are interesting and complex characters that appeal to audiences…although maybe for different reasons…however in both cases these interesting traits are brought to light by the abilities of the person doing the profile.  Neither Molly Socha nor Nika Knight rely entirely on their subjects to draw in an audience, but rather use the characters as a jumping off point to create entertaining pieces.

Think about it…what’s SO interesting about a crazy old man feeding baby squirrels or another do-gooder saving the lives of animals?  New York (and really the world) are full of crazy people doing much crazier things than taking care of abandoned baby squirrels without a license.  Hard core animal rights activists hold protests and toss red paint onto people wearing fur…Casey just helps animals get adopted.  The hooks that draw in the audience really come from the talent of the two profilers.  They both embed themselves in the daily routines of Goetz and Casey in order to find those little weird tidbits that make a story truly interesting.  For instance there’s the fact that Goetz was a sensation in the 80’s for shooting four black men on the subway…something that may be well known to New Yorkers but isn’t necessarily well known to the general public.  There is also the fact that Goetz passed the test to be a  certified wild life rehabilitant yet refused to accept the certification.  He does things his way or no way.   Socha does an amazing job of portraying him as this Batman like figure…a dark knight saving the city’s squirrels on his terms…even if it means a few deaths.  It’s fascinating.
Of the two profiles I think Knight had an easier subject to work with.  To start with who doesn’t love animals?  Who doesn’t love someone saving animals?  Casey is an advocate for those without a voice, but he is also so much more.  He is the creator of a community, a hero to his charges, and someone who connects on a deeply personal level with the animals he rescues.  Knight’s example of when the dog puts his paw in Casey’s hand is both heartwarming and intriguing…what is it about a person that causes animals to react in such a way?  Again the story is in the details like the fact that Casey started by adopting reptiles because the assumption of course is that he got into this to help cats and dogs not cold blooded snakes and lizards.  He is a true animal lover who does not discriminate.
Both Goetz and Casey are interesting enough on their own, but it is truly the work of Knight and Socha that make them really fascinating.  This is what I will take away most from these profiles.  ANYONE can find an interesting person to profile, but not just anyone can really pull out an interesting a detailed story.  I want to find these same little anecdotes that aren’t necessarily on the forefront.

Biff Truesdale the Wonder Dog

Susan Orlean’s profile on Biff Truesdale the champion show dog boxer is a perfect example of thinking outside the box when it comes to profile writing. The subject of this particular feature is a dog, but Susan gives him personality and makes the reader fall in love with this lively egotistical character. Right from the very first sentence when Orlean proclaims “If I were a bitch, I’d be in love with Biff Truesdale,” I was hooked. Throughout the entire piece Orlean’s incredible use of personification and detail work to truly paint a picture of Biff the person not just Biff the dog. She also does an incredible job of using contrasting themes. Here is Biff the boxer who is a champion show dog and “very much” in charge of his own destiny yet every part of his day is scheduled down to the last detail. Biff is a dog. He would be perfectly happy chasing a ball around all day…the shows make his people happy.

One particular part of the profile that really stood out to me the most was the description of Biff’s face: “His face is turned up and pushed in, and has a dark mask, spongy lips, a wishbone-shaped white blaze, and the earnest and slightly careworn expression of a small-town mayor. Someone once told me that he thought Biff looked a little bit like President Clinton”. This little passage is packed with description and really provides the reader with a mental picture of Biff’s sweet face. Orlean describes a dog’s face with a human’s expression which falls right in line with what is done throughout the entire profile. Biff is made out by his trainer, owners, and friends to be a man in a dog’s body. Even his owners talk about him as if they are truly his parents: “Oh, he has my nature,” Tina said, “I’m very strong-willed, I’m brassy, And Biff is an egotistical. self-centered, selfish person”. Tina takes credit for every aspect of his personality and this does not seem bizarre to her in any way.

Ultimately what I took away from this piece is that a profile doesn’t HAVE to be about a human. Orlean wrote a feature about a dog that is also about the show circuit wrapped in a story about the people that take credit for the accomplishments of their animals while still trying to make it seem like their dogs have decision making skills. It’s fascinating. Biff is interesting on his own and the extra characters just add even more humor, fun, and absurdity to the piece. I also really lover her use of description and quick short sentences followed by long descriptive ones. It moves the story along…pacing it somehow. I hope to master this tool for my own profile…if I can’t have Biff I can at least use him (and Orlean) as a road map.

Audio Feature

I did my best! Still a work in progress! This is Kelsea.

Pointe Shoes and Platforms

Pointe Shoes and Platforms

Bed Bugs and Cockroaches

Imagine living in a place where every night when you fall asleep you are literally attacked by insects that have infested your living space and made it their own.  Most of us can’t imagine such a horrific scenario, but for people like Ms. M and Stephanie this is a part of their daily routine.  This audio feature was in part good because of its subject matter, but also because of the tools used by the interviewer and editor to truly put it together into a piece that tells a story.  I was there with Ms. M when she had to go to the hospital and I could feel the bed bugs hopping around my body as Stephanie talks about how her blue polka dotted sheets used to feel as though they were crawling.

This feature does several things very well.  First and foremost the interviews themselves flow with a sense of purpose and are constantly driving us as listeners to the big WHY question.  Like Ira Glass said if you string along a bunch of steps in a story in a descriptive and interesting tone in order to get to the reflection you have a good story even with the most boring of subjects.  This subject matter was by no means boring on its own accord and was in fact made even more interesting and “hang on the edge of your seat” by the way the narrator spoke and the like ability of the interviewees.  Right at the beginning–22:20 to be exact–the interview gets us with the hook: ” Ms. M has some very bad nighttime experiences *pause, build suspense* with roaches.”  BOOM! Right away the listener is involved.

 

Another well used component is the noise used in the background during the interviews.  From 22:20 to 23:05 while Ms. M is discussing her roach infested apartment there is screeching in the background…the screeching of hungry roaches.  At 27 while Stephanie is describing how she sees bed bugs with “bellies full of blood” the hum of a fluorescent light punctuates the shocked silence that follows.  Each sound is used to remind the listener of the squalor these people live in…the pain they go through every night that to them is just a part of life.  The narrator says it all at the end of the piece “Stephanie had grown a colony if bed bugs, in an apartment of bed bugs, in a building of,bed bugs.”

So why tell these stories?  Why delve into these horrific living situations?  Again the reason comes at the end: the moment if reflection.  A week after the Stephanie’s story aired the landlord hired an exterminator and they are now bug free and happy.  This is the why: people need to know that other peop,e live every day in these conditions and nothing is being done so that something HAS to be done.

 

 

Temporary Photo Essay

Teddy Shoes is a family owned dance wear treasure chest in business since 1957

Teddy Shoes is a family owned dance wear treasure chest in business since 1957

The interior of the store is long is narrow reminiscent of your grandmother's attic.  The variety of merchandise stacked to the ceiling matches the hodge lodge of customers walking in the front door.

The interior of the store is long is narrow reminiscent of your grandmother’s attic. The variety of merchandise stacked to the ceiling matches the hodge lodge of customers walking in the front door.

For instance there is Spencer Doru Keith--a professional ballet dancer for Jose Mateo Ballet in Cambridge, Spencer began working at Teddy Shoes to "Learn more about my feet and how they work.  I really wanted to know more about what I do."

For instance there is Spencer Doru Keith–a professional ballet dancer for Jose Mateo Ballet in Cambridge, Spencer began working at Teddy Shoes to “Learn more about my feet and how they work. I really wanted to know more about what I do.”

And Teddy Shoes is certainly a place to learn more about one's feet!  They pride themselves in providing every customer with the "perfect fit".

And Teddy Shoes is certainly a place to learn more about one’s feet! They pride themselves in providing every customer with the “perfect fit”.

Breada Potts

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